Friday, May 06, 2011

The Third Bear's Revenge












Special thanks to Cherie Reich who gave me the idea for this episode with her "Flash Fiction Blogfest" for today. If you'd like to read this story without the images, you can visit my other blog.

Catch the next episode on Wildcat Wednesday!

Also, don't forget to check out this week's, "You Write the Caption" and tune into "Ask Uncle Kerouac" on Monday to find out if you have the winning caption.

And if you should want Uncle Kerouac's advice to a problem in your life, just send your question in an e-mail to "AskUncleK@gmail.com."



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13 comments:

  1. Cherie ReichMay 06, 2011 4:09 PM

    Thank you for entering! I'll announce the finalists on Monday on my blog, and I'll drop back by here and give you a comment on your entry then as well.

    I also have to say I love the pictures with it. :D

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  2. Christine RainsMay 06, 2011 4:21 PM

    That was hilarious! Yours has been one of my favorites in Cherie's Blogfest.

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  3. UnknownMay 06, 2011 5:32 PM

    Oh! Definitely not Goldilocks. Loved this one!

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  4. Nicole ZoltackMay 06, 2011 5:48 PM

    That was awesome! Loved it!

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  5. BethMay 06, 2011 6:14 PM

    Looks like Sam is up scat creek without a paddle!

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  6. stuMay 07, 2011 4:22 AM

    This is wonderfully whimsical. I like it a lot.

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  7. AnonymousMay 07, 2011 5:53 AM

    Very nice. I loved the twist ending.

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  8. Lisa PottsMay 09, 2011 7:18 AM

    Loved it! Nice twist on a classic. I'm your newest follower.

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  9. Cherie ReichMay 09, 2011 11:22 AM

    Bill, or should I address Ted. E. Bear, you are one of the six finalists in my Flash Fiction Blogfest. Voting will run until Friday morning, and I'll announce the winners.

    This was absolutely brilliant. I loved how the bear tried to get his revenge and how bitter-sweet it was. I was shocked at the bear heads. It had me laughing and cringing. It was wonderful and a personal favorite of mine.

    Good luck and congrats!

    P.S. The pictures were adorable and fantastic!

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  10. SoniaMay 09, 2011 1:37 PM

    hilarious! loved the pictures, too. lol Fantastic twist on the original.

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  11. J.C. MartinMay 09, 2011 5:07 PM

    What a wonderful take on Goldilocks! Poor little bear, so bent on revenge he didn't realise Goldie was actually a bear hunter!

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  12. Cherie ReichMay 13, 2011 1:48 PM

    Congrats, Bill and Ted E. Bear! You placed second in my Flash Fiction Blogfest. You have the choice of a writer's kit, a $20 gift card to Amazon, or a 25-page critique. Please email me and let me know which gift you'd like.

    Congratulations again!

    And, no leg breaking. ;)

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  13. UnknownMay 14, 2011 6:39 PM

    glad to discover your blog.
    creative mind.

    check out short story slam and make a submission today.

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